226NeXuS's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Rico and Martin Ep.3-4]

tight.

genius.

[Serious Halo]

>=\

Desecrating Halo now are we?
Your art is OK, your animation is horrible, and the music is probably unfortunately my least favorite song by Xerxes-Sangco. One star for art, Two for music choice.

[Madness Insternation 1]

Doesn't play. Ever.

Well, I saw the other comments that the preloader doesn't load, so I hit "Watch this movie" and went back to the other things I was doing. Lo and Behold, an full hour later it never finished loading, never offered any way to play, right clicking and selecting play didn't do anything, nothing would.

You get a 2 because your preloader looks semi-decent, even though it doesn't work, and because others say it's amazing. Otherwise, you would get a straight 0.

[The Sky Is Broken]

:'( ...... so sad...

that was touching, really kills one's chipper mood though because one becomes so involved and emotionally entwined with the character throught the music... it's amazing...

[A Canvas And A Struggle]

brilliant, but... so morbid!

That struck SO many chords! You have a truly brilliant mind! And great artistic (and animation(...istic?)) ability!

[:the Composer:]

It's beautiful!

If I could have reviewed this sooner, I would have.

This is really quite amazing! It's simple, but It's still incredibly well. I find the song quite easy to get lost in, as well... but I feel you could have told the story just as well, and possibly slightly better, without any vocals at all, and just let the animation and music do the talking for the entire story. Nonetheless, BRAVO!

ENCORE!

[The Death of Hank]

Meh, it's ok

Good for a first, but increase your framerate, It couldn't have been more than what, 5 fps? Either that or you forgot to make tweens for the movement and such, because... It's reaaally, reaaaaalllly jumpy. And no offense intended, but maybe improving your english slightly would help as well =) ...
Keep trying and striving!

Jordo76 responds:

Thank

[Halo Piano]

Clever.

It's amazing how sometimes simple Ideas can be so much cooler than big complicated ones. Good work.

FrozenSheep responds:

|:U

[Shiftlimits:Portal Collab]

stickfigures?

incredible! the most awesome stick animationsd by far I've ever seen! might I be able to participate in one of your future collabs?

NickSiamas responds:

Join the forums, show some stuff, and there's a chance.

[FlashForBegginers2]

potential much

It has a lot of potential, sure... just work on it a little bit in terms of spelling, grammar, making it not so damn hectic, improving the actionScript a little (I learned to code from a "For Dummies" book, and it has 10x more code- plus, you have to type it by hand), and don't just say "Copy and Paste this code", because NO ONE learns like that! You have to teach the viewer the breakdown of the code, what each part does, how you can combine it together, all of that! And if you don't know the breakdown, then you probably can't actually program anything original with it can you? Keep trying. A 4 for actually doing something, but -6 for everything wrong with it. I hope this doesn't get blammed because I know how that feels, but if it does don't submit anything else like this until you've worked on the things I mentioned!

hellz-v-vampirez responds:

i wasen't gonna submit another one untill ive leard more myself